Query Critique #13

This query deals with science fiction and features LGBTQ characters. Something I've seen quite a bit since I started doing this is that writers are forgetting to include the category…

Query Critique #12

This query looks at a picture book, which required me to do some research so I'd have something to refer to. According to this post by Mary at KIDLIT, a…

Query Critique #11

This query looks at a YA urban fantasy. However, I question whether it's really an urban fantasy. In urban fantasy, the city itself tends to be a character.  In Query #7,…

Query Critique #9

Today's query critique involves an adult novel that takes place in another country. Disclaimer I am not an agent or an editor. I do not have a college degree that…

Query Critique #5

Disclaimer I am not an agent or an editor. I do not have a college degree that makes me an expert. I am simply sharing my thoughts on the query…

Query Critique #3

Disclaimer I am not an agent or an editor. I do not have a college degree that makes me an expert. I am simply sharing my thoughts on the query…