Query Critique #10

This query critique looks at a YA Fantasy novel and discusses the order in which one should present the parts of the pitch. Disclaimer I…

Query Critique #9

Today's query critique involves an adult novel that takes place in another country. Disclaimer I am not an agent or an editor. I do not…

Query Critique #8

Trigger warning: This query mentions suicide. I'm happy to see this novel has a diverse cast, including an LGBT and two disabled characters, which make…

Query Critique #7

Today's query is a fantasy novel. There are so many different subcategories of fantasy, that pinning down what you are writing is important when querying.  YASLA…

Query Critique #6

Today's query is an adult memoir. Since I've never written a memoir before, I had to do some research to figure out how to provide…

Query Critique #2

Submitted Query: There is nothing quite as frustrating as being the last person to know what’s going on. Most days it seems like the whole…

Query Critique #1

I love writing queries and helping others with others whenever I have a chance. Add your critique in the comments! Dear Natasha, Five thieves break…