Query Critique #23
This query looks at an erotic romance and asks what details are important in a query and what can be left out. Disclaimer I am not an agent or an…
Query Critique #22
This query looks at a YA Fantasy consisting of a world full of magic, wonder, and gods who walk among us. Disclaimer I am not an agent or an editor.…
Query Critique #21
Trigger warning: This query focuses on a YA Contemporary that deals with mental health, alcoholism, self-harm, and suicide. Disclaimer I am not an agent or an editor. I do not…
Query Critique #20
This query focuses on a YA Contemporary Romance that involves social media and the rise and fall of teens in today's connected world. Disclaimer I am not an agent or…
Query Critique #19
I found some time and decided it was time to post another query critique. This one is a YA Fantasy that involves dragons and soulmates. Disclaimer I am not an…
Query Critique #18
Today's query looks at a young adult novel which blends two popular genre's and examines stakes. Disclaimer I am not an agent or an editor. I do not have a…
Query Critique #17
Today's query looks at a YA LGBT contemporary and asks the author to consider what a title does to imply a plot point when the query doesn't show it. Disclaimer…
Query Critique #16
Today's query looks at a young adult science-fiction novel with romantic elements. Disclaimer I am not an agent or an editor. I do not have a college degree that makes…
Query Critique #15
This query critique involves an adult epic fantasy that has multiple POVs. Disclaimer I am not an agent or an editor. I do not have a college degree that makes…
Query Critique #14
Today's critique deals with novels that cross into different genre's and the importance of providing a hook, plot, and stakes within your query. Disclaimer I am not an agent or…